Today, we were learning to write a dimante poem. A dimante poem includes 7 lines, 6 nowns, 6 verbs and 4 adjectives. Line 1 would have 1 nown, line 2: 2 adjectives, line 3: 3 vrebs, line 4: 4 nowns, line 5: 3 verbs, line 6: 2 adjectives and line 7 would have 1 nown. Our subject had to be the moon and sun. Here is my work.

Sun

Fiery, Gold

Brightening, Boiling, Burning

Gas, Day, Dark, Night

Reflecting, Glowing, Shining

Grey, Cold

Moon

How can I improve this?